Friday 19 October 2007

Two-minute Freewrite (5)

When Colin hurtled past me time stood still as all of his life flashed before my eyes - it didn't take as long as it should have. In that split second I psyched myself up to "go down there and give him hell". But when I heard a wet crunch instead of a wet splash my legs nearly gave out. The barnacles around him slowly turned pink.

1 comment:

Christine McIntosh said...

I like what you've written here, but don't feel you're paying over much attention to my previous comments. Hope I'll see a more continuous version tomorrow - oops: today!