As my cousins helped drag me from the sucking spray onto the rocks I gasped for breath and vowed that I would hurl myself into the sea at least once more before we left for home the next week.
Can I suggest you indicate where you have edited old posts - either by doing a new post altogether (copy and paste, then change) or by colouring the altered words?
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I think you should really say "the next week" - otherwise you bring the whole thing into the time we are in right now.
Can I suggest you indicate where you have edited old posts - either by doing a new post altogether (copy and paste, then change) or by colouring the altered words?
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